tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post7910636895578520286..comments2023-10-06T07:41:33.430-04:00Comments on Across the Lake, Eerily: SUMMER SETS SAILAcross the Lake Eerilyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08625145154438353074noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-82684433143287267862010-09-13T21:25:50.938-04:002010-09-13T21:25:50.938-04:00Walt,
That is so cool! I love it when the formatt...Walt,<br /><br />That is so cool! I love it when the formatting of a piece is as important as the words themselves. Brilliant.Londyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15343104291205942392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-34129372089120314462010-09-09T12:30:03.886-04:002010-09-09T12:30:03.886-04:00Thanks Kimiko. I'm out here. Working on some, ...Thanks Kimiko. I'm out here. Working on some, and clearing some cobwebs. Keep a watchful eye. I may be back, but for now, you can check my other blogs and get you all the Walt you want.<br />Keep poeming, I'm still reading.Across the Lake Eerilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08625145154438353074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-42977458724084580522010-09-08T21:03:13.783-04:002010-09-08T21:03:13.783-04:00What a lovely form! I miss me some Walt.What a lovely form! I miss me some Walt.Kimiko Love Martinezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13434671349791221371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-57793746646082612432010-09-07T11:31:35.234-04:002010-09-07T11:31:35.234-04:00:0):0)Across the Lake Eerilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08625145154438353074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-16610672247669943502010-09-07T11:22:25.353-04:002010-09-07T11:22:25.353-04:00Gorsh! You're just saying that because it'...Gorsh! You're just saying that because it's true!Across the Lake Eerilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08625145154438353074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-75729971693445048572010-09-07T11:14:45.028-04:002010-09-07T11:14:45.028-04:00Beautiful in both content and form. Creating a poe...Beautiful in both content and form. Creating a poem that literally sets sail is not easy in this venue. Very impressive!<br /><br />M.E.Across the Lake Eerilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08625145154438353074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-36003405814133456482010-09-07T11:09:13.100-04:002010-09-07T11:09:13.100-04:00I agree, Patricia. Even on Huron this image would ...I agree, Patricia. Even on Huron this image would be Great. The Erie Team thanks you. It took some finagleing, but I was able to get the shape I wanted.Across the Lake Eerilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08625145154438353074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8863862453683571009.post-31386659481856249422010-09-07T10:54:52.103-04:002010-09-07T10:54:52.103-04:00Walt, this little send-off to summer is a wonderfu...Walt, this little send-off to summer is a wonderfully smooth wall of words. The concrete poem shape is great and as I re-read the poem, the syllables of long and short words just seem so effective for the theme of the poem.<br />I think this one could even sail over to Lake Huron! <br /><br /> Terrific Tuesday to you and the Erie team!<br /><br />Patricia<br />http://pm27.wordpress.com/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17254228974989688426noreply@blogger.com